A lede (occasionally, 'lead', highlighting its etymology) is the opening sentence or paragraph of an article, that is crafted to grab the reader’s attention. It summarizes the most important information right away, setting the tone and context for the rest of the article. 'Lede' tends to be the US usage, elsewhere, 'lead' tends to be used.

There is a writeup type that is a 'lede', as demonstrated here. Th lede writup type will always appear as the firt writeup in a node.

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A journalism jargon term for the beginning of an article. A lede will ideally lay out the basic foundation of the story while enticing the reader to finish the story.

The lede serves a dual and somewhat paradoxical purpose. By giving the basic facts, a busy reader can get the important details by just skimming the lede. In this way, one can read just the front page of a good newspaper and still keep on top of the day's important stories. However, well-written ledes should convince this busy person to keep on reading — to lead them on, in effect. (The word "lede" is in fact derived from "lead" but spelled differently to avoid confusion¹.)

E2 is a little different — no jump pages, no underwear ads (unless you count animefu). But the goal remains the same. Noders are busy, and writeups better have a damn good reason why people shouldn't just stop at the first paragraph.

An appetizer, not a smörgåsbord

Some people are famous due to athletic or acting skills. Others are famous due to luck. Robin Leach became famous for visiting famous people's houses.

Robin Leach (Billy)

What did that tell us? What do we know?
  1. There is a person out there named "Robin Leach," a person important enough for Billy to write a node about him.
  2. Robin Leach is famous.
  3. Robin Leach visits other people's houses, which also makes him famous. This also makes him odd.

Fact No. 1 we got from the node title (which, in keeping with the newspaper analogy, is most like the headline.) Fact No. 2 gives us crucial information. Fact No. 3 gives us crucial information as well, plus, it makes us want to learn more.

And Billy's lede did its job.

A good lede will begin to answer the following questions:
  • Who?
  • What?
  • Where?
  • When?
  • How? and/or Why?

Keep in mind that the lede does not have to answer each of these questions fully. That's the job of the article/node. Also, keep in mind that How? and Why? are special. Answering those complicated questions are far out of the scope of the lede, but they should nevertheless be hinted at. How? and Why? are the interesting part of an article, and if the lede doesn't mention them, the reader may think that the article will not do so either.

Let's put these questions against the node Robin Leach:
  • Who?: Robin Leach.
  • What?: An odd famous person.
  • Where?: In other famous peoples' homes.
  • When?: Sometime in the past ...
  • How? and/or Why?: Leach used a non-traditional method to become famous, and the reader is curious to find out more.

The only question that this lede leaves open is When?, but Billy answers that in the start of the second paragraph. That's perfectly fine. A lede is an appetizer, not a smörgåsbord.

Let's take a look at some more, shall we?


Cadaver Synod (Gamaliel)

The Cadaver Synod, no doubt the most bizarre episode amidst a papal history studded with strange events, was a product of political hardball, not a question of arcane rules of papal succession. That, and Pope Stephen VI must have been a nutjob.

  • Who?: Pope Stephen VI. He's a nutjob.
  • What?: Some political hardball act called the "Cadaver Synod."
  • Where?: The Vatican, probably.
  • When?: Back when Popes did things like this.
  • How? and/or Why?: We're not sure ... but something strange happened.


flagpole sitting (Kiladogg)

Transcontinental foot races. Dance marathons. The Noun and Verb Rodeo. The Rocking Chair Derby. Lord knows why, but America in the 1920s had a thirst for endurance contests. You could do anything, really, as long as you did it for a long time, and a crowd would gather.

  • Who?: Someone with way too much free time.
  • What?: Flagpole sitting (from the node title), probably for a very long time.
  • Where?: USA.
  • When?: 1920s.
  • How? and/or Why?: Because that's what people liked to watch back then. Wow, Americans were sure freaky!


free lunch (witchiepoo)

There is no way to look cool or dignified while picking up a free lunch card. The teachers hand out the bright blue cards to the poor kids right in front of the whole class. They mark us. It is a sadistic ritual. The star bellied Sneetches watch and smirk with the kind of self-righteousness only allowed to the offspring of the well respected.

  • Who?: The writer.
  • What?: Free food, plus teasing.
  • Where?: School.
  • When?: When I was in school.
  • How? and/or Why?: In a very public and embarrassing session.


The Greatest Ever

(Associated Press)

Man walks on moon, this day, July 20, 1969.

Remember, the simplest are often the best. Don't get too cute. Journalism's beauty is in its utility.


Footnotes:
¹ — http://www.freep.com/jobspage/high/jargon.htm on the origin of the word "lede" — "The start of a story. It is spelled this way to prevent confusion with lead, a metal that was used extensively in hot-type days, and a term that refers to the spacing of lines in a story."

SharQ points out that some newspapers — such as the Finnish tabloid VG — impose 20-word limits on ledes. This prompts writers to get to the point, which is always a good idea.

Additional info:

  • http://www.poynter.org/dj/081500.htm — more tips on writing ledes.
  • http://www.chipsquinn.org/coaching/2001/010514cliche.shtml — a good list of cliche ledes. DO NOT USE THEM.

    Merci to Gritchka, tooblasted, SharQ and all you Crimeds out there.
  • A lede is the first paragraph or sentence of a news story or article, used to get the reader's attention, let them know what you are writing about, and provide the most basic information in an easily intelligible manner.

    In the 1960s enterprising newspaper journalists started to use the spelling 'lede' to refer to the lead paragraph in a news story. This was done to distinguish the homographs lead (intro) and lead (movable type), two words in common usage in the printing trade. 'Lede' is an archaic spelling of lead, and is currently only used in this specific sense. There are still journalists and writers who write lede as lead, although they are currently in the minority.

    Ledes are an important part of writing, and as such they have been analyzed and criticized, described and bastardized. Here's a quick guide to some types of ledes and misledes:


    Hard Ledes:

    Direct, factual, and to the point.


    Blind lead: My favorite type of lede, a blind lede assumes that the audience you are writing for knows nothing about the subject. You don't start with an exciting and engaging hook, you start with a short, clear statement of what the subject is and why one should care. After you've oriented your audience you can include a more traditional lede in the next line, or as the first sentence in the second paragraph.

    Summary Lede: Perhaps the most traditional lede, at least in reporting; it seeks to report the core context right up front, often planned to address the five Ws (who, what, when, where, why, and sometimes how).

    Straight Lede: Direct and to the point. Generally a thesis statement or summary of the piece.

    Round-up lead: A lede that tries to introduce multiple topics. This sounds bad, but it isn't always. "Robin Hood is not only a classic English folk story, but also an animated Disney feature, a comedic musical, and a new film starring Russell Crowe." If you are actually able to interrelate all topics in the lede into a cohesive essay, more power to you. Just remember that ledes are supposed to be simple introductions. If your lede is a tangled mess, it doesn't speak well for the rest of the piece.


    Soft Ledes:

    An intro that is less direct, using some sort of hook to engage the reader before getting to the hard work of informing them.


    Anecdotal Lede: A lede that tells a story, introduces interesting characters, and attempts to get the reader interested on a interpersonal level rather than laying out the facts of the story. "John has been walking down these streets for hours, looking for a job. He has a wife and 16 children waiting at home, and he is worried that he will not be able to buy them food for dinner tonight if he doesn't find work soon."

    Question Lede: Opens with a question (e.g., "Who really discovered the true meaning of Christmas?"), hoping to engage or intrigue the reader.

    Zinger Lede: A short, grabby lede that grabs the reader's attention, generally despite conveying little information. A zinger lede is so clever, interesting, or even confusing that the reader reads more, either because they like the voice or tone of the article ("Sometimes it’s the princess who kills the dragon" -- Susan Leonard), or they have been presented with a mystery that they must solve ("His last meal was worth $30,000 and it killed him." -- Edna Buchanan).

    Delayed lead: Also known as a feature lede, because they are often used in feature articles. These are hardly ledes at all, as they can take multiple paragraphs to set the stage.


    Dos and Don'ts:

    Backing into the lede: Closely related to the blind lede, this is when you include the most interesting information at the end of the introductory sentence or paragraph. Saying that someone is backing into the lede is essentially a criticism of their writing; if you thought the delayed lede was a good choice you would indicate this by calling it a blind lede or other more positive phrase.

    Backing into the lede is extremely common amongst the grammatically inclined, and some of the oddities of journalistic grammar arise from a dread of backing onto the lede. Here is an example of backing into the lede: "Noted scientist Bob Marley reports finding mutant rats in New York". Here is the approved newsspeak version: "Mutant rats invade New York, reports scientist". The eye catching phrase comes first, the boring parts later. This is closely related to the first verb principle, which asserts that the first verb the reader sees should describe the most important 'what' of the story. 'Rats invade' is exciting, 'scientist reports' is boring. Don't blame the journalists, blame the fickle public.

    Buried lead: Even more extreme, burying the lede refers to hiding the lede paragraphs or even pages into the piece. This is less common than backing into the lede, but is more obviously annoying, so is a more common criticism among the general public.


    It is common advice to keep ledes short and to the point, kill your darlings, use the active voice, and keep it simple. This will all depend rather a lot on what you are writing, and the context in which it appears -- a blog post is not a newspaper article, and shouldn't be. It is also useful to remember that the lede doesn't need to do too much work; you have a whole article to expand upon your topic. However, if needed, a lede may be followed by a nut graf, which gives a bit more information and context to the story.

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