Of course theres the most blatant tipoff that your story has come fresh out of the overactive imagination of a 12 yearold with a hard cock who hasnt yet passed his english exams -- namely, grammar, or lack thereof:
"His hot stiff one slide into me and pleasure ahh yes I have much!!!"
You might think I'm just being stupid, but I recently read a story (someone forwarded it to me, its not like I go out on usenet looking for such crap!) and the grammar was just so appalling it took the whole story to the point of being an absolute joke!
Update:
Here it is, I found the one that inspired me to write this:
- By 10 AM she was already inside a teen clothes' store in a
nearby mall, a place specialized in female teen garment, with lot's of sexy
stuff.
- The straps were very thin and constantly rided
down her shoulders, sometimes falling in her arms
- Since it was a large top her hooters were exposed when she bended or
even arched her back a little more than usual
- The girl was also wearing the micro skirt she had just brougth
- I felt very sexy in my outfit and was crazy to test it's effect on men.
I think you've
heard enough...
Unless of course, you have a bad grammar fetish... grin