What's This All About?
"Metro City Chronicles" is an ongoing series of superhero fiction. I've been working on it since early 2009, the first story was posted here in March of that year, and I hope to keep working on it 'til I finish it -- and yes, I do have an endgame mapped out for the whole thing.
The stories are set in Metro City, a large metropolitan area of approximately seven million people, located in an unspecified state and location, likely in the Northeast. The city is home to over a dozen different superheroes -- none of them are officially affiliated with any superteams, but they all work together very closely.
Other background elements? Well, obviously, it's a world where superpowers, superheroes, and supervillains exist outside of just comics, TV, and the movies. The first costumed crimefighters appeared in the 1930s, but history there has played out pretty much like ours -- mostly the same leaders, mostly the same wars, mostly the same pop stars. Does it mean temporal patterns are difficult to alter? Does it mean a higher power is mapping out the progress of our universes? Or does it mean that it happens this way because it usually happens this way in comics?
I started writing this partly because I've always enjoyed superheroes, and partly because the last few years have left me deeply dissatisfied with the state of the comics industry. I'm tired of reading comics that are not fun or entertaining, that wallow in truly gratuitous violence and death, that celebrate barely civilized attitudes about women and minorities, that seem to be written solely by and for white males who never managed to mature beyond fourth grade. I decided if I couldn't read comics I'd really enjoy, maybe it was time to start writing them instead.
So how 'bout it? You want to read some stories?
Stories? I Want to Read Stories!
Here are the stories making up the series:
- Atlas and the World
- Atlas Drugged
- Atlas Returns
- Atlas Underground
- Star Treatment
- Star Search
- Star Observer
- Hybrid Vigor
- Hybrid Amok
- Hybrid Identity
- Gamma Blast
- Gamma Whirled
- Gamma Time
- New Squid on the Block
- L.A. Squid
- Release the Kraken!
- Hazy Shade of Winter
- Ice Screams
- Winter Olympians
- Express Delivery
- Trouble Express
- Spaceship Express
- Cobra Strike!
- Castle Cobra
- Chrome Princess
- And more to come!
How Can I Tell All These People Apart?
Let's meet our main characters, shall we?
Atlas - Former member of the Assembly of Order. He's got classic superhero powers -- he's superstrong and bulletproof, and he can fly. He's a Hispanic man, mid-40s, a towering 6' 10" with a stereotypical superhero physique. He's married, and his three kids all appear to have inherited his powers.
His costume is a red and white bodysuit with an oversized red and silver helmet, gloves, shoulder-guards, and boots, along with a stylized silver "A" breastplate on his chest and a long white cape.
The Chrome Cobra - The unofficial leader of the Metro City heroes, the Chrome Cobra may not be the best known superhero among the general public (she actually tries to stay out of the public eye as much as possible), but among other superheroes, she is considered the big favorite. She's an absolute professional, even if she's also an obsessed control freak. She's earned acclaim within the hero community as a nearly unstoppable badass, able to take down full teams of supervillains singlehandedly.
She wears a suit of powered armor that isn't as massive and
overpowering as most battlesuit heroes, but she makes up for the smaller
size with higher maneuverability, low-level superstrength, hard-light
weaponry projected from her gloves, and her own natural agility and
master-level fighting skills.
The Cobra is about 5'8" tall. She wears green and yellow powered
armor with plenty of chrome silver highlights. Her large metal boots
contain flight jets, while her gloves have light-emitting panels to
create her weapons. She wears a full-face mask with a cobra-hood design
and small goggles.
Daffodil - You should actually avoid calling Daphne Diller "Daffodil." She really doesn't like the nickname. And you should avoid calling her a superhero -- as she tells everyone, she isn't a superhero, she's a private investigator. Sure, she has superpowers -- namely, she's completely invulnerable to all damage -- but that doesn't mean she's a superhero. Superheroes work for free, and Daphne Diller expects her clients to pay up promptly. If only she could keep the other Metro City superheroes from dragging her off to fight evil...
Daphne is an African-American woman in her upper-20s, about 5'7", with short dreadlocks. She doesn't wear a superhero costume. Didn't you hear she isn't a superhero?
Defender - If you want a crisis defused with as little violence as possible, you call on Defender, who wears a supersuit stocked full of nonlethal weaponry. Aside from durability and a minor dose of superstrength, Defender's equipment includes neural stun pulse gloves, glue traps, energy nets, and subliminal pacification burstcasts. She can also fly and dispense a regenerative gel for simple first aid.
Defender is 5'5" tall. Her armor is blue, white, and silver, with a blue and white helmet with a reflective silver faceplate. Her entire outfit glows brightly.
Express -
Derek Battle is a mutant with superspeed powers. He isn't the fastest
man on Earth, but he is able to run several thousand miles per hour.
Though he operates under the codename "Express," he doesn't have a
secret identity -- he publishes his real name in the phone book to make
it easy for anyone who needs help to contact him.
Express is an African-American man in his upper-20s, six feet tall,
with a weightlifter's physique, a close-trimmed beard, and a shaved bald
head. He wears a dark green and black bodysuit with red trim, short
sleeves, a cowl, and goggles.
Gamma Girl - Metro City's newest hero is a radioactive
heroine who doesn't have a secret identity because she had such a public
origin and debut. Renee Windler was a cancer patient receiving
radiation therapy when an encounter with a radiation-blasting
supervillain gave her blue skin, white hair, and extensive
radiation/heat powers.
Gamma Girl is 5'6" tall and wears a blue and white bodysuit with a white metallic
belt, cuff-top boots and gloves, and a logo with the letters "GG" inside
an atomic symbol. She's married and has two daughters.
Gearbox - The closest thing Metro City has to a renegade superhero is Gearbox. He's a robot, and since the government doesn't recognize any rights for sapient robots, he runs the risk of capture, exploitation, and deconstruction by the police, federal agents, or certain large unscrupulous megacorporations. So he avoids civilian authorities at all costs, though he maintains excellent relations with the rest of the local superhero community.
Gearbox is a mechanical shapeshifter. He can reconfigure himself into any form he needs, turn his hands into buzzsaws or his legs into wheels, reshape himself into pulley arrays, flying machines, small vehicles, or almost anything else. He can also survive being completely dismembered and put himself back together in mere minutes.
He is a 5'6" red and yellow robot, very thin, covered in metal plating, pistons, and gears. His eyes are small yellow bulbs, and his mouth has a moveable jaw, but other than that, his face is almost entirely expressionless. His voice is always very calm and has a slight synthesizer reverb -- he sounds a lot like Douglas Rain, the actor who provided the voice of HAL in "2001."
Hybrid - Considered the city's most terrifying
superhero, Hybrid is a semi-feral shapeshifter prone to carving up bad
guys with claws, fangs, and animalistic rage. In truth, she's a great
deal more in control of her temper, but she finds that her monstrous
reputation helps intimidate the city's criminal population.
Hybrid is a Hispanic woman in her lower-20s, about 5'7" with long
black hair. She wears a green and black costume with an asymmetrical
design and a stylized "H" on her chest, plus a black and gold belt,
black and green mask, and black open-finger gloves.
Hypothermia - Kelvin Mauro used to be a scientist
creating life-saving cryogenics treatments, but an attack by corporate
spies turned him into a hulking ice statue with a variety of cold-based
abilities. Deeply embittered by his transformation and by the loss of
his family, he still tries to do good works as a superhero.
Hypothermia is a 6'4" ice man, covered with jagged spikes of ice. His
face is mostly featureless aside from his browline. His only costume is
a pair of blue and silver bicycle shorts.
Iota - Even before he learned he was a mutant able to fly and shrink down to an eighth-of-an-inch tall, Stephen Denziger was the kind of genius inventor who comes along only a few times in a generation -- he created the prototypes for his armor and his neural stun gauntlets when he was only in elementary school, and has continued to create amazing inventions since then. He'd be a billionaire if he devoted his time completely to his scientific creations, but he just enjoys the excitement of superheroing too much.
Iota is a Caucasian male in his mid-20s, 5'4" tall with short brown hair. His costume is an armored red and blue outfit with a red and blue helmet. His neural stunners are hidden inside the oversized gloves he wears.
Jonni Rotten - Joan Rotenberg used to be an
all-American high school beauty queen, until she and her family were
sacrificed by the blasphemous Church of Sorrow... which then completely
botched a series of spells and accidentally turned her into a
mystically-empowered zombie. Using her supernaturally high fighting
skills, she remade herself as Jonni Rotten, Metro City's angriest and
least popular superhero.
Jonni is a Caucasian female, 5'8" tall, with a spikey Bride-of-Frankenstein
hairdo. She has rotting green skin, is often surrounded by a small swarm
of flies, and smells like spoiled meat. Her costume is the same as her
civilian garb -- black pants, a black heavy-metal T-shirt, and as many
weapons as she can carry.
Miss Mega -
The strongest person in Metro City is the eight-foot-tall brunette bombshell called Miss Mega. The upper end of her strength hasn't been measured yet, but she's held her own against some of the most powerful beings on the planet. She isn't able to fly, but is able to leap vast distances. Though she enjoys squaring off against superstrong villains, her protective nature often has her working to shield weaker citizens -- and at her strength class, "weaker citizens" tends to include other superheroes, too.
Miss Mega is a Caucasian female in her mid-20s. She's 8'2" tall, has long brown hair, and is considered exceptionally attractive. Her costume is a black bodysuit with an orange and yellow lightning bolt motif and highlights. She wears black cuff-top boots, black gloves, and a black domino mask.
Penitente - Metro City's lone unpowered hero is Penitente. Though the city's other superheroes initially tried to discourage him, he's proved his worth and skills as a hero many times over. Aside from his high levels of athleticism, he has a lot of skill with acrobatics, bullwhips, martial arts, motorcycles, and improvised weaponry.
Penitente is a Hispanic male in his upper-20s, about six feet tall with a muscular build. He wears a loose-fitting blue and gray costume with a face-covering blue and gray cowl.
El Phantasmo - Metro City's youngest hero is El Phantasmo, who can control and communicate with the spirits of the dead. Ghosts of all kinds are drawn to him and want to help him, thanks to his "Undead Charisma." With their spectral assistance, he can fly and perform feats of telekinesis and estra-sensory projection. He can even deflect bullets, if by "deflect bullets," you mean "have ghosts catch and discard bullets for you."
Phantasmo is about 5'6" tall with a slim build. His costume consists of black pants, a black T-shirt decorated with a stylized cartoon ghost, and a black jacket, topped off with a colorful luchadore mask that completely hides his face. He's also constantly surrounded by spirits and ghosts, orbiting him in a spectral swirl.
Squid Kid - Lenore Pittman is a wisecracking
goth-punk college student who gained her powers after participating in a
botched magical ceremony with a mistranslated passage from the
Necronomicon. She is able to turn her arms into black, hyper-elastic
tentacles and can sprout six more out of her back. She also heals
quickly and has low levels of X-ray vision.
She is a Caucasian female, 5'5", in her low-20s. She dresses in goth-punk
styles and has short black hair. If she uses her powers for about 15
minutes without a break, her appearance changes to a more monstrous form
-- however, Lenore is completely unable to see herself looking any
differently. She wears her own street clothing instead of a regular
superhero costume.
The Star - Another former member of the now-defunct Assembly of Order. The Star has cosmic abilities -- he can fly, emit blasts of cosmic energy, capture foes with cosmic energy snares, and even temporarily take on a form composed entirely of stellar energy.
He's an African-American man in his low-30s, a couple inches over six feet tall. He wears a blue and white bodysuit with a starburst logo, along with a mask and a white cape.
The Wheelman - Greg Brachemann is the greatest driver in
the universe. He can win any race he enters. He can jump a station
wagon over the Grand Canyon. He can drive across the country in six
hours on a quarter-tank of gas. He can drive a car out of an airplane in
flight and land safely. He can drive up the side of a skyscraper. He could've made a fortune as a stunt driver, auto designer, or
celebrity. He's decided he wants to be a superhero instead. It's an
added bonus if he can also get rich as a celebrity stunt driver.
The Wheelman is a Caucasian male in his mid-20s, about 5' 10"
tall, and very handsome, with short blond hair and a dazzling smile. His
preferred superhero costume is whatever set of designer haute couture
he happens to have on, along with his ever-present sunglasses and the
winged sandal logo he usually wears somewhere on his person.
Hey, That Was Cool. What Other Information Do You Have for Me?
There is actually a TVTropes page for this series. I tell random people about this in the grocery store. "Hey, mister! There's a TVTropes page about something I wrote! High five!" I get escorted out of so many grocery stores.
I hope you enjoy reading my stories!