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Shall I compare thee to a [winter's night]?
You are [without compare] in any place
If I cloned you [Shakespeare], would it be too trite?
Agreed, from here on I will not use a trace.
Fresh snow [glints and gleams] under light of moon
[Sparkling], [glittering], much like I find your eyes
Your smile makes the strongest man, and me, swoon
You gave me your heart, already, the prize
[Ice shimmers] on the glassy [windows], cold
I lay awake, [aching for you] near me
My [soul] lacks but one thing - you to hold
I need you, from your arms I could not flee
[Bitter cold] of my other life behind,
A better lover, I could [never find].