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• ...After changes upon changes, We are more or less the same...
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• After all, the Bible says Jesus' first miraculous sign was to make 180 gallons of wine for a party!
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• And I need you more than want you
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• Upon Hearing Your Sighs After Reading Alice Walker Together
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• She started to fall, and knew she would never come back
• The mythology that defines you may also defile you
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• Or do we like time's children come also at last to the silent shadowlands?
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• What Little I Know About Ingredients For Thai Cuisine
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• I feel disillusionment creeping up on me like the day after a 21st birthday. A deep sigh of shallow disappointment.

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