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When you blow out like a dead star

created by hamster bong

(idea) by Malicious Kitten (5.5 y) (print)   ?   (I like it!) 2 C!s Mon Jan 29 2001 at 0:06:34

it starts.
two stars circling, magnetically drawn together.
waltzing in spontaneously choreographed patterns among
the scattered diamond teardrops, strewn against night's abyssal velvet.

you brush against me accidentally - or not. Does it matter?
skin, aflame with summer-blue heat that eats me up from the inside.
instead of the outside.

now we dance precariously close to each other
with the hellsflames of passion wrapping curiously
gentle tendrils around us both
.

drawing us together.
closer...and closer....
the dance changes from waltz to something
slower.
something truer.
the music - breath and heartbeats - all of it speeds up,
faster and faster and faster

until

two suns become a single sphere of spinning, tumbling fire
for just one second.
and when you blow out like a dying star,
that marigold candleflame that staves off the night and the worries and the
dark...
is snuffed out.


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printable version
chaos

You know it is going to be a strange day when you wake up dead The wind is tunneling through my layers Swell in the Murderous Wind The wind filled the void for an instant
We flow on the mournful wind in a dream of dying Our eyes reflect the light of dead suns People who don't smoke will never die The stars stood still and naked
Dragon Ash Sighs, short and infrequent, were exhaled, The light is red, but there is a green arrow Tell me your passionate cruelty
Dream Log: May 29, 2002 I Never Saw Another Butterfly dance Trail of Tears
A little child could never kill this clean My body falling into stars I bent my wookiee Jasmin St. Claire
dead pool Instead of the single bullet theory Yom Hashoah I don't want to be alone
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