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Watching them together

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(idea) by Trina (9.3 mon) (print)   ?   (I like it!) 1 C! Sun Nov 26 2000 at 11:59:52

It's really odd watching them together.

"Could you rub some sunscreen on my back for me?"
"Sure"

And he does.

His hands move gently, skilfully over her skin, smoothing in the lotion. His face is calm and quiet. His eyes flicker from the nape of her neck to their son, playing in the shallow water of the toddlers' pool.

They share a cigarette, drag for drag, and their fingers touch unselfconsciously passing the butt back and forth.

They walk side by side to the kiosk, and share the can they've bought, sip for sip.

She worries about her bikini-line, and whether she's shaved it well enough... and he reassures her, and she relaxes.

Sure, they don't smile into one another's eyes, their bodies don't yearn towards one another, but ... they look together.


And they're not.

It's been at least two months since she asked him to leave. He lives in another house. He sees his son a couple of times a week.

I suppose it's a good thing, to be able to be pleasant, warm, to appear to be good, close friends...

But it's really really odd watching them.


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chaos

bikini-line Every strong wind one leans into and smiles should bring back a lost toy from childhood sunscreen Lotion
Kiosk Swinging from a Star cigarette Hey, stranger. I worry about you.
Jealousy skin Good Thing I may be lying in the gutter, but I am looking up at the stars
Hands Eyes water
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