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Part V: Dialogue and Other Sounds
Not all furs are completely silent when they yiff. At
least, I have yet to find one that hasn't at least
panted, grunted, moaned, or growled once or twice. There are,
however, specific times when this type of action is
appropriate - and more times when it is not.
Dialogue must be handled carefully, since not all furs
enjoy talking while being intimate with one another. Silence is
a powerful tool in the paws of those who know how to use it.
Breaking the silence with key words can also enhance the effect
of anything you might be doing.
Kashra casually hooks a finger into the opening of
your sheath, kissing back at your muzzle and smiling softly. "I
love you... "
In this case, the mixture of feelings and sound sets the
mood immediately between the two characters. Though the
adjective softly is meant to describe the smile, its placement
just before the dialogue also causes the reader to think of the
words as being spoken in a soft and loving tone. You
don't have to think about all this right away. With time
and practice, and a lot of writing, it'll come to
you.
For now, the best advice is to think what would be more
yiffy or intimate for you, silence, or dialogue. This generally
is good enough to guide your decision.
Radjin smiles back at you and mouths his well-known
reply back silently, his lips brushing against
yours.
Of course, if you were me, you'd know he was saying
"I love you too" but it was just implied in his pose, a
perfectly reasonable assumption on his part.
Sounds are just as important as any other sense in exciting
your playmate. They are also just as effective as a badly posed
action at causing your mate to frown disappointedly. When you
think about making a sound such as a growl, or a grunt
(especially in the case of the latter), always think about what
it sounds like.
Grunt is a word you probably want to avoid. In many cases
it's the only one that seems logical, but you must
consider how it will sound to the other player when
reading.
Kashra tugs down slowly on your sheath, exposing the
very tip of your growing length to the cool air as he watches
your reaction.
Radjin grunts and squirms helplessly in his
mate's grip, the torturously good feeling flowing through
him.
Sure, to Radjin, grunt seemed just fine in this case, but
to Kashra, it made him sound too much like a pig. One of his
pet-peeves. He hates hoofed animals. When you want to use a
word to describe a sound you're making, its probably
better to use onomatopoeia instead. That is, type out what it
sounds like.
Radjin grrrrfs and squirms helplessly in his
mate's grip, the torturously good feeling flowing through
him.
This helps to describe Radjin's actions better, and
also makes him sound more wolfish by combining the sound with
more of a growl type of effect.
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